This part will discuss about the critical analysis of the article after reading the text. The main arguments of the article will be discussed in this section of the analysis. The fist point for starting the critical analysis of the article is about the persuasion of the author. The author conducted good research that can be used for future studies but the author lacked some points that could have made the article more persuasive. The main points of this topic like individual preferences of the people of that time were not discussed in detail. How eroticism and individual sexual preferences were connected. These preferences or agendas as expressed by the author build up in making the culture of the society. Some of these points were missing that could have given the article more persuasive opening. Another point that was lacking in the article and fueled up in not making it so persuasive was the examples from the current time. Chinese culture is adapted from the Ming culture of that time and it is important that connections of past and present are displayed so the reader can have a clear picture of the situation.